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This would be a lovely fairy tale, wrteitn in prose in fact, I can see you doing a whole series of them, but to me they are more suited to prose instead of poetry what do you think?

Not a big concern but I get bugged by the American use of drug, to mean drag. When you drug some one you give them pharmaceuticals, when you drag some one you pull them along behind you.
Other than that another successful chapter.

And now it is time to RUMBLE!!!!!! Oh man this is it, the battle thats been brewing for so long have finally arrived.

I juz hope you don't rush it. If you ever watch manga anime, you will realise that an important battle always take a few chapter to conclude. I don't mind if you take that long, but hope you don't (lol), only hope that this battle will be as memorable as those anime such as Bleach, Naruto and so on.

Hope you don't mind me using the manga anime for reference.

Dino

Wonderful! I love how the arrival of Ynara brought them hope and didtraction. Come on continue with the battle! i cant wait canyou say a bit more about Roarke,s role in the storu? he just kjnda fadedout.

I agree. I love the story and eagerly await the next portion of it.