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You're doing great don't stop. I can't stop reading.

What happened to Marcus?

I love all of the chapters and I hope you don't let anyone tell you otherwise

ethanschoenheit

As someone that understands the storytelling style you are using I will say not bad. I am not sure on how i feel on the changes you have made yet but and interesting plot and campaign. At lest I hope your doing this up for a campaign also. as for the ones that don't understand you would have to play the game to understand the style. This has a very very heavy wight wolf game inspired style to it even why the repeat that others don't get.

Meh fuck both those idiots. Great story I completely understand what your saying about it being from his point of view and so we get what he is thinking even if that is alot about sindee. Doesn't detract from the story at all. Keep up the good work.