Vampires Obsession: A Dark Descent into Forbidden Love

Forbidden love descends into darkness in this vampire tale of obsession and desire

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Vampires Obsession: A Dark Descent into Forbidden Love I feel I should mention that this is my first attempt at writing a story so I would really appreciate any and all feedback you can give me. So once you have finished reading then please take the time to rate it whether your opinion is positive or negative, and if the story is crap then please tell me why you think so in the comments. reader feedback will be a huge consideration when writing the next chapter so if there is anything in particular you want to see or if you have any helpful suggestions then I would love it if you let me know in the comments. Thanks for your consideration and I hope you all enjoy. ************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************** I know better than to expect five star accommodations from a no name motel that charged by the hour, but I couldn’t help but think that even by those incredibly low standards this place was a dump. Honestly I was fairly certain that the roaches outnumbered the clientele by a significant margin. But beggars can’t be choosers and this place let me pay in cash and didn’t ask for a name or photo I.D. which was a necessity for me at the time. In case you haven’t already guessed I was on the run, and had been for over a month. Still, no matter how fast or how far I ran the old man had never been more than a few hours behind. Until now that is, because the last time we came face to face I dropped a fuel tanker on his head, which had promptly exploded, and even he couldn’t just shrug that off. …and then things took a turn

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